Today I created a red color poem in school. So I decided to show it to you! I hope after this you can make a color poem too since they are really fun! But first here is my poem: Red Splash
Red is the glaze of a sunset,
It is a bold feeling you get inside.
Red is a lush strawberry but also
a bright red starfish feeling it’s way,
Red is red velvet , sweet and yummy,
sitting here in my tummy!
Dear Anika,
Wow! I just love your blog! It has so much detail. I’m wondering how your blog is so amazing? I loved reading your poem and I got a happy feeling inside when I saw your pictures! Keep up the good work!
From, Lily
Dear anika i love your post and pictures keep up the good work
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From el toro
Dear Anika,
You did a really good job on your post i like your red poem a lot.
keep up the good work
From,
Ainsley
Dear Anika,
I really like the pictures,and how the rhyme matches them.
You are a great blogger. Keep up the good work!
From, Tate
Dear Anika,
I love all you picture but I love the cake one the most.
Your poem is great and it has a really good voice to it.
Don’t forget to comment on my blog.
Love From, Lilah
Dear Anika,
I love your post, poem, and pictures, they’re awesome. By the way, nice poll.
From,
Caleb
Hi there Anika
I love you poem. Our students have been writing poems too – here is one blog with some poetry http://tessam.global2.vic.edu.au/
The Student Blogging challenge is almost over and I hope you have learnt a lot from the challenges. You have done a great job and I hope you continue to post about your passions and what you are learning. Remember to keep commenting on other blogs too (I know you have been good at that) – we all like to know someone is reading!
All the best
Celia
Melbourne
Hey Anika,
Your red poem is really cool.
Keep up the good work.
P.S one of your pictures is not working.
hope you can comment back
from Luke
Hey Anika
how is el toro,
and I would make the pets so then fit in the boxes
from Luke